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The harder I work... by JouYasha The harder I work... by JouYasha
...the more discouraged I feel when no one notices.

~Edit~
thank you for all the critiques and I don't mind you critiquing but before anyone else critiques could you please watch how I drew it in the link bellow? ^^; that was the main reason I would like the help. Thank you
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speed paint type thin on colors [link]

Tools Nintendo 3DS XL Colors 3d Stylist

Rose belongs to :iconjouyasha: *JouYasha
art by :iconjouyasha: *JouYasha
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:icondenisejulebff:
Ok, so... I'm not really good at giving critiques but... here it comes:
The body is too thin, and you should try on making the shoulders, neck and face a bit wider, the face is (No offense!) like a fish formed, so, it's to thin! Tho i really love of how you colored it.
Now to the eye: The eye's upper part is to thick, it's even thicker then the above part, with shouldn't be happening, the above is always thicker then the upper part.
Try getting her some clothes on too, there might be perviosh guys out here wanting to see her names >.> <.< Other then that, good job, you've really improved!
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:iconkawaiishi:
I'm not the very best at critique.. But I'll give it a try (:

The structure of this piece over all is nice. Though, the face lacks a bit of symmetry. If you take a look at a real human, it usually has a face that is formed the same on both sides, right? (: So the chin should be a little bit more balanced.

I think you did a really great job on the hair and facial proportions! Though, one thing to keep in mind (if you want details to show) is to not let the hair of the character get in the way of the eyes. The lineart can be there, shining through the iris, but you could leave the eye-part of the bangs un-colored. ^_^

I really appreciate the little marking of the lower lip, and the side of the nose. It gives off a more "realistic feel" with those little details (: And if you want to make your piece even more realistic, you could add a little line, just above the upper part of the eye, to indicate the eye lid.

Good luck in your future art! (:
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sonamyfan555 Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2013
Love it. U did a wonderful job
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:iconjouyasha:
JouYasha Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013   General Artist
thank you :tighthug:
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sonamyfan555 Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013
Ur welcome
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00marrow Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2013
better than me
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:iconjouyasha:
JouYasha Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013   General Artist
thank you :tighthug: but its not true your art is good too :hug: just don't ever give up :hug:
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00marrow Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013
lol ok
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CountessFoxington Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2013
I think you did well. The best part of it is the color. =3
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:iconjouyasha:
JouYasha Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013   General Artist
thank you :tighthug:
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CountessFoxington Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013
You're welcome
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landra15 Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
nice work
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